By Ameer Imam
jo ko dekh ke phenk dun apni
to mere mein shaamil ho

If, the moment I see you, I fling my own sword away — then be sure to take your part in my killing.

Romanहिन्दीAmeer Imam
जो तुम को देख के फेंक दूँ अपनी
तो मेरे में शामिल हो

The verse in Devanagari — it carries the authenticity of the original, and every Hindi reader can read it.

The Interpretation

A lover's dare, and a battlefield image turned inside out. He disarms himself at the mere sight of the beloved — so if he is then cut down, defenceless, she cannot stand innocent; her beauty is complicit in a death her hand never dealt. Surrender and accusation in a single breath.

For You, Today

There is a kind of surrender that is also a demand: I have lowered every defence in front of you, so whatever happens to me now, you own a share of it. Disarming yourself is not the same as absolving the other.

From Ameer Imam's ghazal 'wo aasmaan ki hadon ka shu'ur ho jaana' — his, correctly credited; full text on Rekhta.
Themes:Love & LossThe Self
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